Monday, December 04, 2006

Who I used to be hates who I am...



Could I correct the wrong ….
do I know I care….
Though each day passes…
the past still glare….
Forgive or Forget….
that I cannot do….
Sorrows in time…
could the future undo….
A lost happiness…
that I cant ever find….
Darkness prevails…
my eyes go blind….
Alone surmounting…
the feelings of Past….
Can’t face the sun…
fear the shadows that I may cast…
Running away …
far away from my Sham…
Who I used to be…
hates who I am……………





2 Comments:

Blogger Hrishu Suman said...

"Can’t face the sun…
fear the shadows that I may cast…
Running away …
far away from my Sham…
Who I used to be…
hates who I am……………"


I loved these lines..
It's really nice piece and seems like you have matured as a poet!
Your refined words and crystal clear thoughts make it a joy to flip through it..

it really touches when you say I can't face the sun not because I fear of light but I fear the shadow I may cast.. and running far away from my sham, running away from my own painting of myself.. It's really really good.. Keep it up girl.. :-)

9:09 AM  
Blogger Unknown said...

Hi AKS..
It was really mindblowing and I'm waiting for the day when I would hold a book written by you.
All the best

4:39 AM  

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